the graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph
show
some data between Change the verb form
shows
death
and birth
in New Zealand from 1901 till to give information on the future 2021.
From 1902 to 2001 the line
of birth
was biggest than death
, indeed we can see that it was always among 20.00/ 50.00/ 70.00 births at the
contrary to the Correct article usage
apply
line
of death
which didn’t increase quickly like the black line
, in fact in
Change preposition
apply
the
1961 it rose till almost 70.00 Change the article
apply
birth
. Whereas
about the prevision on
the Change preposition
in
future
the situation will Add a comma
,future
be change
drastically because the grey Change the verb form
change
line
will jump from almost 28.00 death
in 2001 at
almost 49.00 Change preposition
to
death
in 2042, till to
meet the Correct your spelling
it
line
of birth
. In brief
we can see that the Add a comma
,brief
line
of death
will be to grow at
Change preposition
apply
the
contrary Correct article usage
apply
the
Change preposition
to the
line
of birth
which instead
will be decrease
. So we can confirm that in the future will be more Change the verb form
be decreased
death
that
Correct word choice
than
birth
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