Many people believe that cigarette smoking has had a negative impact for far too long and the only solution to end ot, is to make cigarettes illegall worldwide. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give explanations and examples to support your opinion.

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cigarette

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is a common bad nature for many

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in our society.

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ever - increasing

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bad habit can cause detrimental effects

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the respiratory, not only

smokers

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on smokers

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,

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for

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surrounding

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as they inhale the smoke coming out of cigarettes. The cancer rate has

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increased

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cigarette

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and governments in many countries ought to ban smoking. I partially agree with

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notion because it is a feasible solution to combat all the negative impacts caused by

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bad habit,

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however

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technique can

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the economy. It is considered, that the best process to end

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nature is to make it illegal. Implementing

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law,

people

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would fear to sell or buy cigarettes because of the imposition of a fine or even

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jail.

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, in many countries which are ceasing to ban smoking, offenders who trade or smoke a

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will either pay a fine of 600 dollars or go to prison for one month.

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,

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process may have negative impacts

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the economy. A sudden

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apply

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ban

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smoking would lead to

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an

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increase

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increased

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rate of poverty and unemployment. Many

cigarette

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companies would go bankrupt and millions of

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worldwide would lose their jobs.

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,

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style may increase the criminality rate, the illegal actions and

people

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would financially suffer.

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, individuals

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income is

depending

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from

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the

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smoking, trade may decide to become illegal dealers in order to sustain

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their

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standard of living.

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action definitely jeopardizes their freedom.

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, banning cigarettes may not be the best solution.

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, making the crop illegal

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would definitely help with premature death and

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the cancer risk.

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might not be the best

resolve

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as

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recipe, would

cause

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have

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negative impacts

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the

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society. As

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, it is worth considering other options before implementing

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drastic measures.