The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates how many males and females
have
studied in Unnecessary verb
apply
full-time
and part-time discipline in the following years: 1970 to 1971, 1980 to 1981 and 1990 to 1991.
Add an article
the full-time
a full-time
It is clear that
in all three time periods
more people of both sexes were involved in part-time training than Add a comma
,periods
fulltime
. Correct your spelling
full-time
Overall
the total of men in fulltime
discipline rose from approximately 100 Correct your spelling
full-time
thousand
to 200 thousand
, whereas
the number of men in part-time education was lower in the early nineties than twenty years earlier.
As far as women are concerned, the numbers increased in both sectors of education. The number of part-time female students increased dramatically from 700 thousand
to 1.2 million in the twenty year
period. The Add a hyphen
twenty-year
amount
of women in Change the quantifier
number
fulltime
education went up more gradually from 100 Correct your spelling
full-time
thousand
in 1971 to just over 200 thousand
in 1991. This
was similarly
the increase for fulltime
male students.
Correct your spelling
full-time
To sum up
, the figure of
women in both sectors increased significantly Change preposition
for
while
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