The increase in the production of consumer goods causes damage to the natural environment, what are the reasons and what can we do to solve this problem?
In modern society, there are a number of factories and they would operate in a long time because the world population is higher. The reason why increase of the number of factories is many people consume stuffs. The
environment
pollution are caused
by these Suggestion
is caused
phenomenons
any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomena
such
as fine dust
and global warming. This
essay will be discuss
Suggestion
will be discussed
this
problem's reasons
and solutions with some examples.
The Suggestion
reason
environment
is damaged selfish
of human, they achieve luxury lives. Accept comma addition
damaged, selfish
Therefore
, the factories and company make more production for people who want to live more comfortable
. The factories discharge dioxide and chemical wastes, it would cause Suggestion
more comfortably
serious
Suggestion
serious environmental problems
serious environmental problem
a serious environmental problem
environment
problem. For instance
, Korea is affect
fine Suggestion
has affected
dust
because Chinese make
many factories in their territory, many Koreans have to put on Suggestion
makes
mask
when rate of fine Suggestion
a mask
the mask
masks
dust
is high. According to the report, fine dust
has a serious effect on people's respiratory organs. In addition
, these harmful object threats our eco-system.
In order to reslove
the issue, they need the bring to an end; settle conclusively
resolve
government's
Suggestion
government
reguration
and international cooperation an authoritative rule
regulation
such
as convention of environment
. The solutions to this
problem have to be very efficient and long term. One of solution
is that governments and international organisations should strictly control the location of factories and the amount of wastages. Suggestion
the solution
Then
, they should prohibit to built
Suggestion
build
factories neary
rivers, lakes. Accept comma addition
factories, near
factories near
factories nearby
In addition
, eco-friendly alternative fuels should be introduced such
as solar power system.
To conclude, it is undeniable fact that development is damaged
the Suggestion
has damaged
is damaging
damages
environment
. Therefore
, we should make even a small effort to preserve the environment
such
as recycling, reuse plastic bag and so on.Submitted by dudntkd7 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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- however
- although
- even though
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