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the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010

the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010
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describes
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 the percentage of British university
students
 who could
used
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use
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 other
languages
beside
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 their mother language between 2000 and 2010. In
overall
,
Spanish
 was used by
the
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most
students
 in that
years
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year
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. In 2000, the
percentages
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percentage
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 of
Spanish speaking
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Spanish-speaking
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students
 was
the
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30
percents
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percent
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, the highest of all.
Students
 who used French and another language had 15
percents
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percent
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 equal
half
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 of
Spanish
students
. The
percentages
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percentage
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 of
German speaking
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German-speaking
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students
 was 10% equal
students
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used
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who used
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 two other
languages
.
Students
spoke
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who spoke
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 no other
languages
 had 20
percents
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per cent
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, In 2010, there was a little bit changed. The percentage of
students
used
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 Germany didn’t
changed
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. The
percentages
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percentage
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 of
students
 who spoke no other
languages
 and French was
Spanish
,
another
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another language
other languages
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languages
 and two others
languages
 each again 5
percents
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percent
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Spanish
students
 was 35%.
Anothers
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In other
languages
, speaking
students
 was 25
percents
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per cent
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. Two other
languages
 speaking
students
 was 15
percents
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per cent
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, languages, spanish, percents with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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