In nearly all science courses at university, there are significantly more male students than female students. What is the reason for this? What could be done to balance out the numbers?
There is no doubt that
science
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subjects
are considered Use synonyms
as
a boon for the advancement of modern civilization these days. Change preposition
apply
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the majority
science
majors in Use synonyms
University
have always been dominated by male students rather than female students. Fix the agreement mistake
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negative trends can be attributed to many factors, namely negative stereotypes involving females and conservative mentality against them. In order to reduce Correct determiner usage
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this
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of solutions can be implemented. Looking Use synonyms
firstly
at the causes, one of the most obvious reasons for Linking Words
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the reduced
number
of female students is the ever-lasting gender prejudices that persist in our society. Use synonyms
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, in our community, females are confined to Linking Words
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to invest more money in males Correct your spelling
reasonable
instead
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science
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subjects
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is because, it is quite a common thinking in our community that the sooner the Linking Words
girls
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girl
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girls
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issue, two effective solutions can be administered. One would be to empower Linking Words
women
, which is likely to pave the way for Use synonyms
women
to achieve higher education. Use synonyms
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can only be implemented if the Linking Words
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aware Add a verb
government is
government was
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of it's
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people by campaigning about the role of Correct your spelling
its
female
in Fix the agreement mistake
females
science
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subjects
. Use synonyms
For example
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government
can encourage Add an article
the government
the
young Correct article usage
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girls
to opt for scientific Use synonyms
subjects
by telling them Use synonyms
the
immense contribution of Marie Change preposition
about the
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another female scientist
other female scientists
into
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in
this
field. To deal with Linking Words
the
early marriage, Correct article usage
apply
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government
can enforce stringent laws. Add an article
the government
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would act as a deterrent for the Linking Words
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contemplating to marry off their Correct your spelling
families
girls
before they reach maturity. Use synonyms
Furthermore
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the goverment
goverment
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government
punisment
, if anyone defies Correct your spelling
punishment
this
law. If Linking Words
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government
had imposed Add an article
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this
law earlier, Linking Words
then
many Linking Words
women
would have been able to study without any interruption and the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
female
in Fix the agreement mistake
females
science
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subjects
would have increased. In conclusion, underestimating Use synonyms
women
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as well as
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main
reasons for Correct article usage
the main
decreased
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the decreased
number
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female
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science
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subjects
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however
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this
issue is not insurmountable. In my view, both the parents and the Linking Words
government
should be responsible Use synonyms
to tackle
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for tackling
this
problem, and they should begin by considering some of theLinking Words
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solutions
solution
proposed above.Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
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