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When choosing the job, the salary is the most important consideration to what extent do you agree or disagree

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The most attractive word in professional life is earnings when deciding to choose a new profession, earnings is no doubt an important factor to consider full stop, but there are many other factors which must be considered while choosing a profession
Firstly
, base income should not be your only consideration while choosing your place, there are many more benefits like compensation package, insurance, retirement contribution, paid time off, equity bonuses and many more.
Secondly
, the office hours should be considered, not every job is 9 to 5 if you are used to work in the evening or maybe you are a morning person, make a list of how
this
 change will impact your life
Moreover
, you should consider the growth opportunity with the company and your specific career can give you in
near future
Suggestion
the near future
 because growth opportunity really matters a lot for your career path. The company’s Goodwill should be in your consideration and task security is
also
 very important for a task holder because today in private organisations for smaller firms there is less work security than larger firms To conclude, I believe with no doubt the pay is the most important factor to be considered when choosing any profession because it increases the life quality and living standards of any person if you have a good income you can spend more on your family and your children's higher education.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consideration
  • sole factor
  • financial stability
  • security
  • motivating factor
  • dissatisfaction
  • demotivation
  • job satisfaction
  • overall well-being
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • flexible working hours
  • vacations
  • career growth opportunities
  • skill development
  • advancement
  • determining factor
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