Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is surprising to signify the growth of

multiculturism

the doctrine that several different cultures (rather than one national culture) can coexist peacefully and equitably in a single country

multiculturalism

expanding in different parts of the world. Nowadays, different ethnic groups enjoy living together as a society and thereby facilitate more benefits. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the advantages regarding the multicultural societies would

outwiegh

be heavier than

outweigh

the perils. It would help in bringing up a unique and cooperating generation as well as reduce conflicts based on discrimination.

Firstly

, it would urge the upcoming generation to be a symbol of cooperation.

Moreover

, it would create a sense of happiness around the world. Cooperation would lead to advancement in both

technological

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technology

and national aspects.

This

would

inturn

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in turn

increase the income and living status of different ethnic groups in the society.

Moreover

, it would help decrease the amount of national conflicts.

For example

, the

first

female collector of Uttarpradesh was a backward class

women

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woman

, who has taken a step forward to bring more

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

to the

economical

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economic

development in India.

Additionally

, it would be a significant reason for reducing the feeling of dilemma for different ethnic groups on discrimination. Earlier, a certain group of people

were considered

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was considered

to be discriminated from the others, resulting in verbal harassment and even a serious crime like killing. Various laws

has been introduced

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have been introduced

to drop

this

point of view.

For instance

, in India

,

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,

the SC's, ST's and OBC's are given equal representation in politics as well as society related issues.

Oppurtunities

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Opportunities

to vote have been their greatest achievements of all

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

, earlier they were denied the right to vote. To conclude, people should curb

thier

of them or themselves

their

mentality and have a

sensation

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sense

of unity. It would bring more benefits than drawbacks because, the more

united we

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united, we

stay, the more we are strong.