The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

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Over the past few decades, the issue of environmental pollution
has became
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has become
a major
concer
be relevant to
concern
concert
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
the destruction of the planet
.
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.
Althoght
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some
peple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
claim that general people do not have the power
,
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,
I personally believe that
anyevery
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any every
has a huge obligation and responsibility to conserve the
environment
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. There are some individuals can do to address the problems as
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss
further
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in the following essay. There is no doubt that only government and large organization can influence people to reduce the
demage
the occurrence of a change for the worse
damage
damages
of
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environment
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the environment
.
For example
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,
government
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the government
can establish legislations regard to
demage
the occurrence of a change for the worse
damage
damages
of
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environment
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the environment
like illegal logging and
overfishing
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. Ultimately, people would follow the law and reduce the amount of destruction.
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, another large organization can do is to make people aware of the
consquences
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
consequence
of
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environment
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environmental
pollution.
For instance
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, they make films or
advertizing
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
to show pollutions around the world, As
result
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a result
,
peple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
can see how
envirnmental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
environmentally
problems serious are and know how to protect our planet.
Nevertheless
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,
although
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some people feel that ordinary
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
only a little impact to change the world, I feel that everyone is a crucial key to improve our e
.
Accept space
.
For example
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, Greta Thunberg, one of
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environment
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environmental
activist
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activists
,
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,
at age 15
,
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,
she started giving
speech
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speeches
a speech
in public about the problems of
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environment
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the environment
. As
result
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a result
, many people
influence
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are influenced
by her and try to reduce the amount of pollution in many
part
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parts
of the world. In conclusion, despite the fact that
government
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the government
and large organization have the power
and
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And
imapct
the striking of one body against another
impact
on
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environment issue
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environmental issues
environmental issue
an environmental issue
the environmental issue
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am convinced that general people
also
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paly
participate in games or sport
play
pay
a
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an
important role to
perserve
keep or maintain in unaltered condition; cause to remain or last
preserve
the planet
regardess
in spite of everything; without regard to drawbacks
regardless
ages and
postion
the particular portion of space occupied by something
position
in society. Provided a combination of governments and
individuals
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individual
individual's
actions to tackle the problems, our
environment
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can became
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can become
better.
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