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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant.

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The pictures demonstrate the current and planned layout of the university sports
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
. Overall,
as a result
 of a lot of areas are planned for the future, dramatic growth is observed.
Furthermore
, all facilities will be indoor in the future. At present, the facility which includes three main parts has one indoor and two outdoor sections. When entered from the entrance, the reception stays ahead, there is a changing room on the left and seating on the right. The noticeable facility in the indoor section is the 25m pool between the gym and the reception.
Furthermore
, there are two outdoor courts on the left and right wings. Looking at the future plans, in the present facilities, there will not change in except for extending the gym.
Besides
 that, various changes will be done. The changes can be divided into east and west wings and both wings outdoor courts will be demolished. In the west wing, a new leisure pool will be added behind the old changing room and a new changing room will be added to its south. Looking at the east wing,
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