The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates
fish
and meat consumption
in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, the consumption
of chicken showed a steady but significant rise over the period
while
the usage of beef, lamb and fish
experienced a downward trend.
As can be seen from the graph the consumption
of chicken was not the highest in 1979 however
it climbed steadily and reached around 250 grams
in 2004. The usage of fish
remained stable throughout the period
. There was a growth of fish
, nearly 60 grams
per week in 1979, although
it was the lowest at the end
of the period
.
In 1979 the consumption
of beef and lamb were
nearly 220 and 150 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
grams
respectively. The
Correct article usage
Beefs
beefs
usage fluctuated Change the wording
beef
kinds of beef
slices of beef
portions of beef
in
the beginning of Change the preposition
at
1980s
. The data Correct article usage
the 1980s
of
beef surpassed chicken until 1990 and Change preposition
on
then
declined sharply, reaching nearly 100 grams
per week at the end
of period
. In the meantime the Add an article
the period
consumption
of lamb decreased gradually over the period
, reaching about 60 grams
per week.Submitted by fariza.k19 on
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