The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts how many participants enrolled in drama, painting,
sculpture
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language
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at an educational facility in 2009. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the pie chart conveys information about the Linking Words
age
of the attendants who were divided into five Use synonyms
age
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Firstly
, the most striking feature is that the most popular lessons were Linking Words
language
and painting. It can be noticed that the Use synonyms
language
course had the highest Use synonyms
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of attendants that stood at 60 of which 20 were men and the Use synonyms
number
of women was double. Use synonyms
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, the least popular Linking Words
courses
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sculpture
which had a Use synonyms
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of 30 and 15 participants, respectively. Interestingly, the Use synonyms
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of women exceeded the Use synonyms
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of men in all classes, except for the Use synonyms
sculpture
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Secondly
, it is clear from the data depicted by the pie chart that the evening Linking Words
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age
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age
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age
groups at 26% and 16%, respectively. Use synonyms
Finally
, the group of people who were the least interested in attending evening lessons were those aged 20-29 and below 20. It can be Linking Words
deducted
that 42% of participants who enrolled in the above-mentioned Correct your spelling
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courses
were aged 50 and above, Use synonyms
according to
the data illustrated by both pie and bar charts.
In conclusion, the Linking Words
language
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in contrast
to the Linking Words
sculpture
course which was the least favoured. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of women attending lessons far exceeded the Use synonyms
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of men in three out of four classes. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, adults older than 50 displayed the highest interest, Linking Words
while
people under the Linking Words
age
of 20 showed almost no interest in evening Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sculpture, language, courses, age, number with synonyms.
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