The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the data about languages, most spoken in the world, and
It reports if who speaks the specific
language
is a native speaker
or learned it as an additional language
.
It can be clearly seen that Mandarin Chinese is the language
with the largest number of native
Add an article
a native
speaker
, 900 Fix the agreement mistake
speakers
million
, that
is about three times the Correct pronoun usage
which
people
who talk Hindi, Correct quantifier usage
number of people
that
occupies the Correct pronoun usage
which
second
placed
in Change the form of the verb
place
this
ranking.
Mandarin is also
the second
most diffused additional language
, behind only English, that
counts 603 Correct pronoun usage
which
million
of
Change preposition
apply
Add an article
the speaker
speaker
. Fix the agreement mistake
speakers
This
statistic makes English the second
language
most spoken
in the world with only a difference of 150 Add the auxiliary verb
is most spoken
million
people than
Mandarin Chinese.
The other languages have Change preposition
to
about
much Change preposition
apply
less
speakers than the previous ones, Spanish and Hindi, Change the quantifier
fewer
instead
was
spoken by more than 400 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
of
people, and a consistent number of these are native Change preposition
apply
speaker
, aboutFix the agreement mistake
speakers
the
90%. Portuguese and Arabic are the least spoken languages in Correct article usage
apply
this
list, and especially the
Portuguese counts only 10 Correct article usage
apply
million
speaker
as an additional Change to a plural noun
speakers
language
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Vocabulary: Replace the words language, speaker, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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