The government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, air pollution has become one of the most sever problem and one of the major cause is the great number of cars. So the government tries to fix

this

by making some punishment on those private car owners when they are driving during the traffic peak. I think it is probably a way to solve the problem, but there may be other better options to take. In my opinion, imposing a fee on car owners may make them

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take

other

transportaions

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportations

.

Such

as subways, buses and bikes.

This

reduces the usage of fuel burning cars which indirectly cut down the

emmison

the act of emitting; causing to flow forth

emission

of fumes. Why does it work? About 10 years ago, in

oder

(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed

order

to deal with the massive soil damage made by plastic productions, the Chinese government charged a fee on plastic bags using in

supermakets

a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods

supermarkets

,

consequently

, only few people tended

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to buy

lots of bags. But, sometimes it won't help much. Due to the faster and faster pace of life, everyone needs to be hurry no matter where he is. To do so, driving a private car is the best option they get

choose

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to choose

chosen

. Because driving your own transportation is very convenient and fast.

On the other hand

, those public vehicles are much slower and uncomfortable to take. Even if the government

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takes

those measures, people still want to drive during the rush hour. What is more, So what should we do?

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As

far as I'm concerned, the best way to do is focusing on new technology research and development. Today, we are witnessing a great revolution in

energy industry

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the energy industry

energy industries

. More and more new energy vehicles are replacing the traditional air

pollutors

a person or organization that causes pollution of the environment

polluters

pollutes

polluter

. If most of us are using

environmental

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environmentally

friendly tools, there won't be any detrimental gas issues.

Although

those new

equipment

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equipments

are facing some problems like expensiveness, endurance and reliability, I think these can be tackled in the near future. All in all, making driving expensive

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at

during

specific times do make some changes, but we need to find better selections to protect our environment more fundamentally and thoroughly.