The government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhaust fumes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, air pollution has become one of the most sever problem and one of the major cause is the great number of cars. So the government tries to fix
this
by making some punishment on those private car owners when they are driving during the traffic peak. I think it is probably a way to solve the problem, but there may be other better options to take.
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