The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The amount of
goods
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transported by four different modes of transport, namely
road
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,
water
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, rail and
pipeline
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in the UK over a 28-year
period
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from 1974 to 2002 is shown in the line graph. The
quantity
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is expressed in
million
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tonnes
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.
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, the highest amount of
goods
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was
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transported via
road
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whereas
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pipeline
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remained the least commonly used mode of
transportation
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over the entire
period
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.
Although
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there were some fluctuations, transport by
road
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,
water
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and
pipeline
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showed an upward trend
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whereas
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transportation
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via rail reduced for a
while
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before returning to the same levels. In 1974, around 70
million
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tonnes
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of
goods
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were transported by
road
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and
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quantity
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rose to about 100
million
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tonnes
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towards the end of the
period
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.
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Pipeline
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The pipeline
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transported 5
million
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tonnes
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of
goods
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in 1974.
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figure increased steadily over the years and in 2002, about 20
million
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tonnes
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of
goods
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were transported using
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means. Both
water
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and railways transported about 40
million
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tonnes
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of
goods
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in 1974 and that
quantity
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remained more or less the same over the
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four years. Afterwards,
transportation
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by
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water ways
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waterways
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rose,
whereas
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transportation
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by railways declined. During the
period
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from 1986 to 1994, waterways transported around 60
million
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tonnes
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of
goods
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.
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quantity
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declined to around 50
million
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tonnes
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in 1998 and rose to about 65
million
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tonnes
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over the
next
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four years.
By contrast
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,
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quantity
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the quantity
a quantity
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of
transportation
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by rail declined to 30
million
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tonnes
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in 1984 and showed fluctuations until 1998 before rising again to 40
million
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tonnes
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in 2002.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, road, water, pipeline, period, quantity, million, tonnes, transportation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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