You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution

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I am Burak Duman and I have succeeded in your interview for a

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officer position on Monday, November 15th.

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, I have taken some time off to finish my ongoing

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works at my present working place.

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, it is obviously clear that I am unable to can take part in that time for some

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. As I mentioned in my contract, I should participate in the job on November 15th. Yet, I have felt ill two days ago and my doctor advises that I should remain at home for a while to take a rest. What is more, I have not fulfilled all of my backlogs yet.

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to say, even I get better there is no possibility that I start on November 15th.

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it was an unforeseen problem, I sincerely apologize for all the inconveniences that may have been occurred because of my absence.

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, I attend in your team to initiate my new career at the beginning of the

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week and I can accomplish all of my tasks through on my internet. Please let me know if you want

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any proof about my situation or I should fill

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reports. It would be my honour and rewarding experience to be a part of your team

Burak Wed May 27 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

214 words

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You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution

The Greeting

Some countries have introduced a law to limit working hours for employees. Why is this law introduced? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly with. Consider both sides of this debates and present your own idea. You should give reasons for your answer and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience

Some people think that schools should invest more money in technology, such as more computers, while others think more money should be spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your opinion