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The world population has been increasing lately. One way to curb excessive growth in the third world countries is to restrict the number of children each couple can have to 1. Other people believe that empowerment of woman is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Over the years there has been
tremendous increase
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a tremendous increase
 in population across many countries namely China and India. Both have implemented many programs to limit the excessive growth. As we are aware China has already restricted families to have more than one
child which
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child, which
 may stop them from being over populated but it will certainly have drawbacks. 
On the other hand
 a few nations have resorted to educating women as they feel it will have
wider impact
Suggestion
a wider impact
 and will help curb the births.
For instance
: In India educated women are more career oriented and will not prefer having many children. As it can be
seeen
perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
seen
 many of the urban families have no more than 2 children. 
However when
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However, when
 you are forced to do something like in China, people react very differently. When the rule was introduced not many were in favour and it has caused a lot of emotional problems among families. They could have focused on empowering women and helped them understand the
importantace
the quality of being important and worthy of note
importance
 if taking
such
 measures.  In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
 believe the most ideal way to decrease world population is by empowering the women.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • curb
  • excessive
  • restrict
  • empowerment
  • one-child policy
  • ethical concerns
  • individual freedoms
  • reproductive health
  • sustainable
  • workforce
  • holistic
  • correlation
  • demographics
  • socio-economic benefits
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