The world population has been increasing lately. One way to curb excessive growth in the third world countries is to restrict the number of children each couple can have to 1. Other people believe that empowerment of woman is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the years there has been

tremendous increase

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a tremendous increase

in population across many countries namely China and India. Both have implemented many programs to limit the excessive growth. As we are aware China has already restricted families to have more than one

child which

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child, which

may stop them from being over populated but it will certainly have drawbacks. 

On the other hand

a few nations have resorted to educating women as they feel it will have

wider impact

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a wider impact

and will help curb the births.

For instance

: In India educated women are more career oriented and will not prefer having many children. As it can be

seeen

perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight

seen

many of the urban families have no more than 2 children. 

However when

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However, when

you are forced to do something like in China, people react very differently. When the rule was introduced not many were in favour and it has caused a lot of emotional problems among families. They could have focused on empowering women and helped them understand the

importantace

the quality of being important and worthy of note

importance

if taking

such

measures.  In

conclusion I

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conclusion, I

believe the most ideal way to decrease world population is by empowering the women.