crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. why do you think that is? what can be done to reduce the crime rate.

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nowadays

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Nowadays

, there have been numerous problem related to

crime

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is said that

crime rate

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the crime rate

is higher in metropolitan areas than it is in rural areas.

This

problem is caused by many different reasons which will be discussed in

this

essay before the solutions to it are given. There are

number

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a number

of reasons why

this

issue exists.

First

, since urban areas

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are

ethnically diverse than rural areas,

therefore likelihood

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the therefore likelihood

of conflict leading

crime

among people.

For instance

, greater lack of mutual understanding and familiarity

aming

in the middle of

among

individuals in urban areas. Especially that could lead to unnecessary fight, which potentially leads to

crime

Second

, since a number of immigrants increase

constanlly

without variation or change, in every case

constantly

in urban areas, metropolitan areas must compete for limited opportunities and scarce sources, which would leave other individuals' life at stake.

This

means that those who cannot compete with others would have a tendency to commit

crime

that just to make a living.

however there

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However they're

however they're

a great deal of solutions to diminish

crime

rate

, in not only

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, not only in

big cities but

also

rural areas.

Firstly by

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Firstly, by

enforcing stricter punishments would act as a

deterent

something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress

deterrent

for motivation to commit

crime

. Realizing that the costs of breaking the law were higher, despite of facing serious difficulties, every potential criminal would not think twice.

Secondly

, since many offences can be traced back the lack of understanding among people from different backgrounds.

Therefore

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the local official

local official

should organise many

sociocultural

activities that would improve mutual relationships and resolve conflict

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For example

although

torento

the provincial capital and largest city in Ontario (and the largest city in Canada)

Toronto

is the most

multicutural

of or relating to or including several cultures

multicultural

city in the world,

crime

rate is among at the lowest thanks to

such

activities and cultural events.

This

complicated problem

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a complicated problem

caused by many different reasons. So it is difficult to find out the

effective

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most effective

solutions.

However

, above-mentioned measures would be helpful.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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12Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

294 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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social cohesion
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