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some teachers say students should be organized into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method. Which one do you think is more effective?

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Few educational experts suggest students to
study
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 as a team, but some people fight that, students should be allowed to learn alone. In my opinion, studying in a
group
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 could develop students' communication, and studying alone could improve their IQ.
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, both of them have equal importance, and could gain equal knowledge. According to recent studies, it is observed that most of the institutions are allowing students to work independently. When coming to higher studies, most of the students are facing difficulties to speak in a
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 or present themselves in front of other people. Though, students have enough intelligence, still they are unable to discuss their ideas in public.
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 is because, lack of social gathering. Even though, students
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 alone, they have to socially gather with their friends so that, they could discuss their ideas and learn new things from each other. The benefits of people who
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 alone are, they could improve their IQ level and they could
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 for themselves.
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, there are few students who learn or work in
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group
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groups
a group
. In most of the foreign countries, many higher educational schools suggest and force students to work in
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groups
a group
. The main reason behind it is, not all the students are from same place, same region or from the same religion. Interacting with all the
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 type of students, could help them to develop their language skills and they will overcome the fear of speaking in
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group
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groups
a group
. On the whole,
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 studies will definitely benefit students, because I am perfect example for that. Once I started working in a
group
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, I could notice many changes within me. Parents have to encourage their children to social gather and make them learn new things.
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