You travelled by plane last week and your suit case was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and describe what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

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I am writing in connection with the matter of my lost suitcase, while I was travelling from your airline company. I am

also

astonished by your company’s help services due to their drowsy working behaviour. One week ago, I was going to London to attend a meeting and I took a flight no. 123 of your airline services. I was

also

carrying, my Woodland leather suitcase of dark brown colour with a gleaming golden

handle

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handles

on it. Everything was going well till the flight landed and I was surprised to know that my luggage was not on the conveyer belt. I tried to find that everywhere, but failed. At

last

, I informed the security services and they assured me to help me out. I had all my important documents

such

as, my driving license, ID cards and some cash in it. It has been one week and I have not received any information regarding it. By

this

letter I am requesting you please find my suitcase without

further

delay and keep me posted with all the updates and save me from

further

misery. Waiting for your response.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

187 words

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