Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Due to the modernization,
gender
is not becoming an issue in almost all fields.
However
, some opine that educational Institutes should reserve seats in equal
number
for
both
males and fe
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female
tudents.
Nevertheless
,
this
notion will give eq
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equally
o
both
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genders
I disagree with
this
assertion and I firmly believe that universities should not reserve seats according to
gender
and these should be on ability of applicants not on
gender
basis.
To begin
with, people often believe in
gender
equality,
therefore
, they demand for same into ed
ucation system.
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the education system
They claim that some st
udents especially f
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students, especially
emales will not get ad
dmission i
the act of admitting someone to enter
admission
f there is not any
reservation
for them in the
university
. wh
en a
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When
university
bound to take sa
me
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the same number
number
of male and female students
then
girls will have a vast opportunity to get the higher study.
This
idea seems true in some cases, as girls can not get
admission
in
t
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into
he
university
owing to no
reservation
for them. A recent article on the The Hindu newspaper describes precisely that female students getting less higher education because of no
reservation
for them while taking
admission
.
Nonetheless
, some people opine that
un
iversity s
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universities
the university
hould take sa
me
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the same number
number
of male and female students, the idea behind
this
assertion is not holding ground.
Firstly
,
university
education should be for all and there is not any
reservation
or restrictions while taking
admission
as
gender
does not describe the ability of someone.
Secondly
,
un
iversity s
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universities
the university
hould take en
trance exam
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an entrance exam
the entrance exam
instead
of giving
admission
on the basis of
gender
. If there is
a
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are
ny rule and regulations for
university
to take sa
me
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the same number
number
of students of
both
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nder
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gender, then
genders then
genders genders then
then
this
will create instability among students and potential students either from male or female will not be selected.
Thus
,
this
idea seems irrelevant for me. To sum up, people are advocating for equal rights for
both
ge
nder ,
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genders
ho
Accept space
,
wever, I believe that while taking
admission
in the
university
there should not be any
reservation
or same
number
policy for
gender
. It should be ba
sis o
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the basis
a basis
f the entrance exam,
hence
, students will have immense chances to get
admission
without any hindrance.
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