Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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owing to no

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for them. A recent article on the The Hindu newspaper describes precisely that female students getting less higher education because of no

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education should be for all and there is not any

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will create instability among students and potential students either from male or female will not be selected.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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347 words

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