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Some people think the men and women have good expertise only in particular fields . This means men are better at doing certain jobs and women are better in certain jobs.

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It has been argued by
few people
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a few people
 that a male and female can only perform few task’s
better
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best
 in a specific
areas
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area
. I
totally agrees
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totally agree
 with
this
 statement because of physical strength and managing skill’s of both individual is completely different from each other, both of them excel and can succeed in certain activities. It is a clearly known fact that women are fragile as compared to men so the jobs which needs more of physical strength is difficult for females to do wherein it can be done effortlessly by male counterparts. In a warehouse, we see that there are
lot
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lots
 of male worker’s who lift heavy objects and move them around. Men on
other hand
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the other hand
 do not have the required managing skills like nurturing and mental strength which is needed in every household. We have seen in generation that how are mother’s seamlessly manage the entire household, take care of the elderly member and manage the expenses of the house within the given budget allotted. The way they contribute in our home cannot be done by
other gender
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the other gender
. Some people think we are in the twentieth century, there should be no differentiation between both the gender and two of them can perform the similar activity and
their
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they're
 equal. Yes, they are
equal
Accept comma addition
equal, however
however
 there is a reason why men and women were created separately that way one can excel in certain task and the other in the other task. To keep the essence of
mankind it
Accept comma addition
mankind, it
 is important we subtle understand the difference and respect the same.
as
Suggestion
As
 each one of us can contribute to the society with their respective task which has been prearranged
.
Accept space
.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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