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Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more houses. Should these new homes be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside. What is your opinion?

#countries #population #growth #houses #homes #cities #towns #countryside
A cloak of smoke hovers among
population
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populations
the population
 around the world
,
Accept space
,
 which leads to require of housing facilities to shelter people. With that in mind, there is
discussion bout
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a discussion bout
 whether new development should undergo in existing towns or the
countryside
.
This
 essay will discuss my opinion on developing a
countryside
 area with its factors. One reason for developing a
countryside
 is that it provides
open area
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an open area
 for residents. Since places away from previously structured cities are less crowded, it will offer more space for people to choose their way of living.
For example
, people living in
newly built society
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a newly built society
confirms
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confirm
 that they have more available space for their activities like cycling, running etc.
than
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Than
 people living in downtown.
Therefore
, people are not over-crowded and can lead to
peaceful living style
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a peaceful living style
.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, another key factor is that it gives
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
 to builders and government for developing
areas according
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areas, according
 to
requirements
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the requirements
 of
public
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the public
. As
this
 will encourage people to buy their houses with facilities they need and help them to build a healthy society.
For example
, todays generation actively participates in social activities which requires new methods and open space.
Thus with
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Thus, with
populations
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population
 needs, authorities have
chance
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a chance
the chance
 to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 them by choosing areas away from cities. To
coclude
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
, there is no denying that population is at its
urge
how long something has existed
age
 in most countries around
world
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the world
, it
hence require
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hence requires
place
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a place
 for living. With
above factors
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the above factors
 in mind, I believe that
countryside
 area should be established to gain more
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 and new lifestyle.
Submitted by bakhshish kaur on

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