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In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live with any face to face contact with others.is it a positive or negative development in your opinion. To what extent do you support this development.

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With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take
first step
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the first step
 on the moon.
Nevertheless
, there are some issues which
remains
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remain
irreuocable
incapable of being retracted or revoked
irrevocable
 and as complex as ever. For-instance, the given topic asserts that due to the
internet
 facilities
such
 as: shopping, doing online jobs and sharing our views with each others as well as survive without making direct contact with each other. Should all these facilities provided by
internet
 indicate positive or negative changes in
this
 present
scenerio
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
?Through
this
 essay, I shall explore the dimensions of
this
 topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end. On one side, there is a group of people who reckon that
internet
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the internet
 plays
highly crucial role
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a highly crucial role
 in
everyone
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everyone's
 life. There are
plethora
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a plethora
 of merits of utilizing
internet
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the internet
. They strengthen their
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
 by claiming that in
this
 modern era, massive number of people prefer to purchase
huge variety
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a huge variety
 of products related to the cosmetic as well as household goods, sunscreen lotions are the best epitome.
Therefore
, I have to say that,
internet
 plays
fundamental role
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a fundamental role
 in our life and it seems that it is a positive change.
Moreover
,
internet
 service is a best source of communication with our friends, relatives which were residing in foreign countries.
As a result
, it
provide
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provides
 great assistance to hold strong relationships. Contrary to
this
, there is an opposing group of people who reckon that advancement in
modern era
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the modern era
 in the field of
technology especially,
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technology, especially
technology especial,
 in
internet
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the internet
 have some negative impact on the development of
nation
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the nation
nations
a nation
. They claim that
internet
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the internet
 is just a wastage of
time
. According to their prospective, they realize that most of the individuals communicate with their relatives for
longer period
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longer periods
a longer period
 because,
internet
 service is cost-effective. They believe that '
Time
 and tides waits for none.'
As a result
,
such
 people who spend
lot
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lots
 of
time
 on
internet
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the internet
 may
lost
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lose
 their precious
time
. To crown it all, I have to say that
nevertheless
, there is no single conclusion. Still, I make
this
 ground that an effective clap
require
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requires
 both use of hands. "Every garden has weeds"
therefore
,
nodoubt
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no doubt
,
internet
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the internet
have
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has
 few drawbacks as some people spend much
time
 on it as they required ultimately, leads to wastage of
time but
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time, but
, it has voluminous merits as it
provide
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provides
 great assistance to make social bonding as well as purchasing
variety
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a variety
 of goods. At the end, I personally realize that using
internet
 facilities leads to positive development in
this
 contemporary era.
Submitted by Nani Tk. on

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