Some people say that History is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, people have different views about the importance of
history
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field in comparison to new forms of science. While, some argue that historical fields in schools and universities have
pivotal role
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a pivotal role
in the structure of educational sections, others claim that by appearance of fresh developed subjects like technology there is no room for old knowledge. In
this
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essay I will attempt to cover both beliefs. There are many people who believe that
history
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is one of the most important subjects. Despite the fact that the major aspects of
history
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is related
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were related
are related
to many years ago, it appears that these crucial matters can play an important role in our daily
live
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lives
life
. There is no doubt that many students are interested in past incidents. By exploring the enormous wars, horrible quarrels and idiotic relationships leads to
awareness
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the awareness
among youngsters and students as well as ordinary people who have not sufficient information about primitive societies.
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, many people can learn more from previous mistakes, occurrences and wars.
For instance
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,
German people
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the German people
have changed their opinions about the rest of the world since 1945 by the end of the world war.
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,
history
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has crucial influence on thought,
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and lifestyle of all people who had experienced the repercussions of war.
On the other hand
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,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
group of people
claim
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claims
that new fields of study are more important than
history
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.
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introduced at the beginning of the twentieth century, modern form of knowledge have occupied aspects of life of people by providing sophisticated devices
such
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as automobile and
airplane
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. The followers of technology state that science is more applicable than old stories of
history
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. Nobody can argue with the fact that progressive knowledge like
Nano-technology
the branch of engineering that deals with things smaller than 100 nanometers (especially with the manipulation of individual molecules)
nanotechnology
and nuclear energy have altered our current routine life.
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, critics have suggested that modern society and community is created by newly established science, arguing that historical concepts are useless for the humans who are living with
smartphones
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smart phones
and satellites. To sum up, there are many opinions about whether which field of study is more important. I believe that
history
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and new subjects are vital for the humans to have a good life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
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  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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