The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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data about
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the purchasing
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power of
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coffee
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ad bananas, including five European countries in 1999 and 2004 separately.
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the total amount of
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coffee’s
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sales
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increased in 2004,
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the same regard
banana’s
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banana
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demand boomed except
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2 countries.
According to
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the first
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table (
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coffee)
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the
sales
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of
coffee
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were
th
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the
highest and grew 10 times as much
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in 2004 (20
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euro
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) compared to 1999( 1,5
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). The proportion of
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had a growth in
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Switzerland
by 3
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euro
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, in Denmark by 2
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, in Belgium
0,7
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by 0,7
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euro
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and
lastly
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in Sweeden by 0,2
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in 1999. Turning to
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sales
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,
Switherland
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Switzerland
took the lead compared to
coffee
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(UK), the banana
was
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sold more
32
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than 32
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euro
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in
Switherland
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Switzerland
, 4,5
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in
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,
1,4
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and 1,4
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in Belgium. By marked contrast, Sweeden and Denmark’s
sales
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declined by 0,8 and 0,2
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euro
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in the following year respectively.
Overall
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,
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in comparsion
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comparsion
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comparison
between 1999 and 2004 the general number
number
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of
bananas’
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bananas
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and
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coffee’s
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sales
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increased,
whereas
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two
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the two
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countries did not solely follow
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suit in the terms of
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sales
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sales, euro with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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