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Video games, Internet, Cell Phones and other high-tech gear are just part of growing up in a digital world. But parents are concerned about the amount of time their children spend with these and worry that it might be distracting and cramping academic and social development.

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Technology- Boon or Bane? Written by: Bella Life without
gadgets
 and
devices
 nowadays is almost unimaginable.
Gadgets
 and
devices
 have been designed and developed to meet the growing human needs. But there are always breaks in the clouds and the negative sides of everything. Correspondingly the
high tech
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devices
as well
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also
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 have advantages and disadvantages. These
devices
 come with great advantages and benefits
such
 as access to large amounts of information reasonably and swiftly,
increase
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 in communication as with the help of
this
 you can be easily connected with your loved ones,
speed
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and speed
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 up the work as there are many
devices
 which help you complete your chores at a much quicker pace. But the assets of something come with its liabilities as well. There are various harms of
the
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high-tech
devices
also
such
 as dependency on the
gadgets
such
 that people become so dependant on the use of these
gadgets
 that they cannot proceed
for
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 anything without the use of
gadgets
, online frauds related to money or stealing of identity, difficulty in integrating new technology and various
technology related
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 diseases
such
 as blurring vision, headaches and earaches and may be the reason of cancer, too.
Therefore
, it can be concluded that there are both advantages and disadvantages of using new technologies and
gadgets
.
Also
, it depends on mankind on how they want to use them. ”Technology is a useful servant but a dangerous master.”
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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