the chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the data about the percentage of

the

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people in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom what kinds of products and e-services

they

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bought within a year. Looking at the graph, it can seem that music, computer equipment and books were the most popular goods in the year and people in the United Kingdom liked online shopping. In more detail, internet book

sales

and computer equipment

sales

in three countries

both

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over 40% and

the

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music was

also

over 35%.

In contrast

to toys and financial services, it

just

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under 20% in each country. It shows that consumers prefer to purchase entertainment items more Another thing which stands out is that a higher percentage of consumers in the

made an online purchase than Canada and Australia except for toys and financial services. More specifically, the

sales

of books in the

exceeded the other two countries

almost

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third

Also

, music

sales

show

purchases to be almost

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double of the other countries. Shopping online is popular in the

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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