The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
units
of electricity production by fuel source are different in both 1980 and 2000 production in Use synonyms
Australia
and Use synonyms
France
. The total manufacture in 1980 Use synonyms
are
100 Change the verb form
is
units
in Use synonyms
Australia
and 90 Use synonyms
units
in Use synonyms
France
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the total manufacture in 2000 Linking Words
are
170 Change the verb form
is
units
in Use synonyms
Australia
and 180 Use synonyms
units
in Use synonyms
France
. Use synonyms
Hence
, there Linking Words
is
10 Change the verb form
are
units
difference in both countries in 2 different years.
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Firstly
, the pie chart Linking Words
in
1980 shows that coal Change preposition
for
are
more used in Change the verb form
is
Australia
compared Use synonyms
Change preposition
to in
in
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to
France
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as well as
Hydro Power. Linking Words
Although
, Linking Words
Australia
doesn't practice Nuclear Power Use synonyms
in contrast
to Linking Words
France
. Even so, Use synonyms
France
used more oil than Use synonyms
Australia
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as well as
natural Linking Words
gas
. Use synonyms
Thus
, Linking Words
Australia
is using more electricity by coal, natural Use synonyms
gas
and steam capacity, Use synonyms
whereas
, Linking Words
France
is statistically balancing the use of fuel Use synonyms
source
.
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sources
Secondly
, the pie chart in 2000 manufacture, Linking Words
Australia
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step
up from using coal, 1/8 of steam capacity and 2 Change the verb form
steps
units
of natural Use synonyms
gas
and oil. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
France
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also
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step
up in using nuclear capacity, 25 Change the verb form
steps
units
in both coal and oil, and 2 Use synonyms
units
of natural Use synonyms
gas
and hydro energy. Use synonyms
Hence
, the 2000 production shows that Linking Words
Australia
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have
never used nuclear energy since 1980.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
has
France
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lessen
the use of other fuel Change the verb form
lessens
source
and increase their nuclear energy which Fix the agreement mistake
sources
also
helps Linking Words
for
the environment. Change preposition
apply
Whereas
, Linking Words
Australia
use more coal for electricity and 36 Use synonyms
units
of Use synonyms
hydro power
.Correct your spelling
hydropower
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