The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
units
of electricity production by fuel source are different in both 1980 and 2000 production in Australia
and France
. The total manufacture in 1980 are
100 Change the verb form
is
units
in Australia
and 90 units
in France
. On the other hand
, the total manufacture in 2000 are
170 Change the verb form
is
units
in Australia
and 180 units
in France
. Hence
, there is
10 Change the verb form
are
units
difference in both countries in 2 different years.
Firstly
, the pie chart in
1980 shows that coal Change preposition
for
are
more used in Change the verb form
is
Australia
compared Change preposition
to in
in
Change preposition
to
France
as well as
Hydro Power. Although
, Australia
doesn't practice Nuclear Power in contrast
to France
. Even so, France
used more oil than Australia
as well as
natural gas
. Thus
, Australia
is using more electricity by coal, natural gas
and steam capacity, whereas
, France
is statistically balancing the use of fuel source
.
Fix the agreement mistake
sources
Secondly
, the pie chart in 2000 manufacture, Australia
step
up from using coal, 1/8 of steam capacity and 2 Change the verb form
steps
units
of natural gas
and oil. On the other hand
, France
also
step
up in using nuclear capacity, 25 Change the verb form
steps
units
in both coal and oil, and 2 units
of natural gas
and hydro energy. Hence
, the 2000 production shows that Australia
have
never used nuclear energy since 1980.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
has
France
lessen
the use of other fuel Change the verb form
lessens
source
and increase their nuclear energy which Fix the agreement mistake
sources
also
helps for
the environment. Change preposition
apply
Whereas
, Australia
use more coal for electricity and 36 units
of hydro power
.Correct your spelling
hydropower
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