Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The wild animals are

oldest

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the oldest species

oldest species

spicies

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on the

earth

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.

they

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They

has live

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have lived

the thousands of

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year

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years

ago but

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ago, but

in

last

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ten thousand

year

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the genesis of human.

and

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And

after

year

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and

year

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they gain the population of human being.

and

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And

countinously

at every point

continuously

the

decriment

the amount by which something decreases

decrement

in the population of wild animals.

there

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There

are

somany

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so many

resones

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res ones

are

bihind

further back than; at the back of; at the far side of

behind

the wild species are put in the

denger

the condition of being susceptible to harm or injury

danger

zone.We discuss both

pron

in favor of (an action or proposal etc.)

pro

and cons too about the wild animals.

in

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In

light of

this

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the

precurement

the act of getting possession of something

procurement

of wild

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spicies

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

is very

importtant

of great significance or value

important

impatient

unimportant

to the cycle of the

earth

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life

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.

god

the supernatural being conceived as the perfect and omnipotent and omniscient originator and ruler of the universe; the object of worship in monotheistic religions

God

made the food and

life

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cycle

for

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of

animals

,

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,

also

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human is

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human, is

one kind of animal they were

came

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coming

from

chimpanjies

intelligent somewhat arboreal ape of equatorial African forests

chimpanzees

so

thet

people in general

they

that

say is the human is

animal

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an animal

is not wrong.

approx

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Approx

five hundred

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year

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years

ago the hunting of wild animal was the hobbies of royal families.

and

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And

the

few of wild animals

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few wild animals

were hunted by

wild hunder

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the wild wonder

wild wonder

they use there are for selling in society for gaining money.

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this

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This

is the one

fect

a piece of information about circumstances that exist or events that have occurred

fact

feast

fist

and another fact is the change of environment years and years after the environment is

spoil

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spoiled

by human.

due

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Due

to

globle

involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope

global

warming, air

polutions

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

pollutions

pollutants

, water

polution

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

.

land

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Land

polution

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

.

due

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Due

to

this

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harmfullness

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harmful

harmfulness

to the

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earth it

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earth, it

is very hard to live

in

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on

earth

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for some

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spicies

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

of wild

.

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.

we

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We

could see the oldest wild animal

dinasour

any of numerous extinct terrestrial reptiles of the Mesozoic era

dinosaur

is

disappeare

relatively deep or strong; affecting one deeply

deeper

disappear

because of

harmfull nature

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the harmful nature

harmful nature

of

environment

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the environment

environments

.

nowadays

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Nowadays

the human

are

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is

too aware to save the wild

animals

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animal

animal's

animals'

life

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because they are

disappeare

get lost, as without warning or explanation

disappeared

with the times.

there

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There

is a duty of us to save the wild animals and respect

them some

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them, some

people say that not

warried

afflicted with or marked by anxious uneasiness or trouble or grief

worried

about all

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spicies

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

of wild

animals but

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animals, but

as per my opinion

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

can say that we can cure all

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spicies

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

of wild animal

,

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,

if we put them free to live

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also they disappear

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they also disappear

in

few century

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a few centuries

few centuries

.

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.

So the protection of all wild animals is the religion of every person. At the

coclusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

of the

dicussion

an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic

discussion

decision

is that we all are

responcible

worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable

responsible

for the

dicriment

an accident in which a train runs off its track

derailment

in wild animal so

this

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ia

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

is

our responsibility to save them and cure them.

without

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Without

the

wild

all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

wildlife

life

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we

can not

can not

cannot

live.

there

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There

are so many reasons to save animals.

and

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And

they are the

naturel

in accordance with nature; relating to or concerning nature

natural

property of us so it is our duty to secure them.