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Some people think that activities during the free-time should be planned while others disagree. Discuss both sides and include examples and relevant data from your own experience.

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Do planning and organize all the details for having a good pastime or do not and be free and let to occur any event in future for recreational is one of the
contreversial
marked by or capable of arousing controversy
controversial
 one. In
this
 essay, I intend to come up some pros and cons of
bothe
two things or people together
both
 views while I firmly convinced that
the better
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the best
 way is
have
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having
 a good plan for having good moments in leisure
time
.
First
 of all, as there would be special conditions for any
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 even a short
time
 picnic,
such
 as weather or costs, so if you do not have any prediction for them, it
would be make
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would make
 some problems for you.
For instance
, catch a cold because of rainy and cold weather that you did not consider it and you might have not suitable clothes on that
time
. It is just
an
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a
smal
limited or below average in number or quantity or magnitude or extent
small
 problem that it
would be happen
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would happen
 and it is
exampled
 here.
Hence
, planning for each
details
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detail
 of your free
time
 would help us to
more enjoy of
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enjoy more of
 our
time
.
Secondly
, those one who have
plan
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planned
plans
 for all of their activities during their pastime would achieve more outcome from their
time
 spent. Imagine my
unkle
the brother of your father or mother; the husband of your aunt
uncle
ankle
ankles
 as a father who is
sportman
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a sportsman
sportsman
sportsmen
 and has
an
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a
 special target for their weight, so if he
plan
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plans
a
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an
 especial activity for spending his
leisur
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
time
 with his
childerenby
 doing some sports, he would earn his losing his weight while he is enjoying from
recreational
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recreation
 and spending
time
 with his family. To conclude, in our
society there
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society, there
are
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is
 variety personality of people who are spending their pastime in
defference
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
difference
differing
 ways.
However
, some of them designed their details of activities and some of them not and
might be enjoy
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might enjoy
 it.But
I personally
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I, personally
, believe that
plannig
an act of formulating a program for a definite course of action
planning
 for doing
everythins
all things
everything
 before start it is necessary,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 for leisure
time
 to be
comfort
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comfortable
comforted
 and
enjoy more it
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enjoy it more
 calmly.
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