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In recent years, the small local shop has closed because customers travel to two large Shopping Centre for the mall to do their shopping in this a positive or negative development?

#years #shop #customers #travel #two #centre #mall #development
Changes show
development
; we are living in the modern era, everybody wants to develop. Nowadays, the young generation wants to freedom to choose anything whatever is it,
for example
:
Accept space
:
- shopping, grocery extra. That
time
 dots our parent's purchase
clothes grocery
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clothes, grocery
 stationery from small shops.
Time
 has changed, now, most of the people prefer to
shop
 from
Mall
Suggestion
the Mall
 or large complex centre.
Moreover
, some
time
 to do shopping from
malls shows
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malls, shows
 a positive impact on the country's
development
.
For example
, for the
time
 being, everybody purchases every essential and nonessential thing from malls. It has meant small shopper thinks about their own
development
 and converts their
shop
 into a large
shop
 or maybe the small shops will part of the mall ultimately, beneficial steps for developing to a developed country.
Furthermore
,
Mall
Suggestion
the Mall
 is not only convenient for the
youngster but
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youngster, but
also
 for any age group.
Mall
Suggestion
The mall
 provides lots of
facility
Suggestion
facilities
 like
sitting lifting
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sitting, lifting
 and
many
Suggestion
much
 more, apart from
this
, everything in one place, it means less
time
 consuming as well as less travelling. If you feel hungry, you will eat a variety of food, those are available in the mall rather than the
market you
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market, you
 do not feel tired, sweetie properly, because, you are in the air condition area or ducting environment. That's why you enjoy your shopping as per your convenience. In confusion, every small shopkeeper enhances their thinking towards
development
. Every country's government
make
Suggestion
makes
 plans for
development
, a small
shop
 should take a part in
development
 I know sometimes get a loan from the government is not a piece of cake
however
 we should try at least once. Changes do not happen suddenly it occurs
slowly
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slowly, therefore
therefore
 always try to take a small step towards
development
.
Last
 but not least, every dark cloud has a silver lining.
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