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Nowadays, people ore consuming more and more non-sugar based drinks. Why do they do so? Suggest measures to solve the sugar-based to solve the problem.

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There is no doubt that carbohydrate-based drinks have a detrimental effect on human health. Our society in the present is consuming these drinks heavily for many reasons like advertisement campaigns on televisions and its stimulating taste. Governments can take some actions to reduce
this
 consumption by their people like to announce a health campaign and advising the companies to decline the percentage of sugar on these drinks. On the one hand, the people started to surge in consuming sugar-based drinks without stops or knowing
this
 effect on our life. People drunk sugar-based drinks heavily due to advertisement campaigns, which shows every minute on it.v., and the producing companies are sponsored for most well-known events on
t
the thing named or in question
it
.v.
For example
, celebrated football players and actors are announcing that they drink these drinks every day,
although
 these drinks help them to reach to win and succeed. If the advertisement campaign for these drinks restricted by governments, the percentage of usage for these drinks would decline gradually. On
other hand
Suggestion
the other hand
, some measures should be followed to decrease the trend of using these drinks. Governments can start to announce for health campaign, and show the side effect of carbohydrate drinking in infected by many critical diseases.
For instance
, the over-usage of drinking will lead to overweight, high carbohydrate concentration of blood, and non-normal blood pressure. Did the government forced the production companies to replace or reduce carbohydrate to be based on these drinks, People would save from many critical diseases, which lead many times to death.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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