Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since the massive

development

of numerous countries in the world, prosperous countries

are providing

Suggestion

have been providing

have provided

inpoverished

poor enough to need help from others

impoverished

countries with

finacial

involving financial matters

financial

support, some people,

conversely

, believe that developing countries are on the demand

of

Suggestion

for

other assistance

besides

financial ones. From my perspective, I agree with

this

arguement

a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

argument

and will present my reasons in

this

essay. On the one hand, That wealthy

nations

Suggestion

nation

support

Suggestion

supports

the

poorers

deserving or inciting pity

poorer

with financial aid undoubtedly help these countries to resolve poverty temporarily, not permanently.

For instance

, these governments can only utilise

this

money to pay the debt and loan but

can not

can not

cannot

recover the whole economy. Greece is a sharp example

for

Suggestion

of

this

situation. The Greeks couldn't deteriorate the inflation rate as well as restoring their economy and could only lay their expectation on the international financial aid.

On the other hand

, provided that poor countries

were give

Suggestion

were given

were giving

other

asistances

the activity of contributing to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose

assistances

assistance

existences

,

Accept space

,

the governor could remove the poverty and boost the

development

of economy.

Moreover

, not only can

this

problem be solved

completely but

Accept comma addition

completely, but

also

enventuate

come up with (an idea, plan, explanation, theory, or principle) after a mental effort

invented

in numerous enormous improvements in several aspects of the whole country.

Additionally

,

Accept space

,

This

enrichment

stand

Suggestion

stands

a chance of giving these developing countries to partake in worldwide organization

,

Accept space

,

promoting the general

development

of the world. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the opinion of giving poor countries diverse aids

instead

of only financial ones.

This

undeniably results

Suggestion

has undeniably resulted

in the disappearance of poverty in these countries and a boost to their economic growth as well as having

such

positive impacts on the world's general

development

.