The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart
ilustrates
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illustrates
how many
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Australian
males
and
females
in various
age
groups did regular
sport
in 2010.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph
that
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the most
proportion
of
males
doing regular
phsical
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physical
activity
were
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experienced by 15 to 24
ages
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in 2010,
whereas
the most popular
rate
of
females
it were registered
by
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45
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the 45
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to 54
age
group
.
Moreover
, the
rate
of
females
and
males
in
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and over
age
group
was approximately the same. As can be seen from the graph,
proportion
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the proportion
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of
males
doing
sport
came top ranking with just above 52% in 15 to 24 in 2010, followed by 65 and over which has a
rate
of just under 47%.
However
, the most
rate
of
females
who did regular
phsical
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physical
activity
were
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shown
by
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45
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the 45
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to 54
age
group
, which
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for slightly over 53%.
Further
,
females
in
65
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the 65
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and over
age
group
did the least physical activity
proportion
, which
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at around 47%,
while
males
in
35
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to 44
age
group
did
sport
had the lowest
rate
of just under two-fifths.
On the other hand
,
65
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the 65
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and over
age
group
males
and
females
proportion
doing regular
sport
made up 46.7 and 47.1%
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respectively
respectivelt
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respectively
, which had roughly the same
proportion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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