the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the main reasons why
agricultural
continent becomes less productive. The Correct article usage
the agricultural
causes
are over-grazing, deforestation, over-cultivation, and other Use synonyms
causes
of worldwide land degradation. Use synonyms
In addition
, the table illustrates how these Linking Words
causes
, affected three Use synonyms
regions
of the world during the 1990s. The Use synonyms
regions
are North Use synonyms
America
, Use synonyms
Europe
, and Use synonyms
Oceania
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, the pie chart shows that 35% of over-grazing is one of the main reasons for ground degradation. In Linking Words
Oceania
, a large group of islands in the South Pacific including Australia and New Zealand, used 11.3% of over-grazing, 5.5% in Use synonyms
Europe
, and 1.5% in North Use synonyms
America
. Use synonyms
Hence
, Linking Words
this
has the highest percentage among Linking Words
of
the other main reasons Change preposition
apply
of
land deterioration.
Change preposition
for
Secondly
, 30% of deforestation, which makes it the Linking Words
second
highest percentage Linking Words
next
to over-grazing. In Linking Words
Oceania
, Use synonyms
agricultural
continent becomes less productive by 1.7% of deforestation, 9.8% in Correct article usage
the agricultural
Europe
, and 0.2% in North Use synonyms
America
. Use synonyms
Thus
, these Linking Words
regions
are easily affected by natural disasters Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
flood
, etc.
Fix the agreement mistake
floods
Thirdly
, 28% of over-cultivation worldwide is the cause of land degradation. In Linking Words
Oceania
, they don't support Use synonyms
this
procedure, meanwhile, 7.7% in Linking Words
Europe
, and 3.3% in North Use synonyms
America
.
In conclusion, 7% of other Use synonyms
causes
are affected worldwide. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the most affected Linking Words
Use synonyms
regions
is Fix the agreement mistake
region
Europe
with 23% of the total field degraded, Use synonyms
second
is Linking Words
Oceania
with 13%, and Use synonyms
lastly
is North Linking Words
America
with 5%.Use synonyms
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