The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The bar charts illustrate numbers of students did not
work
full time
both
graduate
and postgraduate in UK after finishing college in 2008. What stands out from the graph that
further
study registered the most student numbers of
both
UK graduates and postgraduates in 2008, while voluntary works had the lowest student numbers
both
of them.
Moreover
, part time
work
and
unemloyment
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
students witness similar
number
both
UK graduates and postgraduates. As can be seen from the graph, the
further
study numbers in UK graduates and postgraduate come
top
Suggestion
topped
a
rankings
Suggestion
ranking
in 2008, followed by part-time
work
.
Further
study numbers of UK
graduate
and postgraduate students accounted for just under 30.000 and approximately 2.500 respectively. The
second
number
considered to
unemloyement
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
part, which has
number
Suggestion
a number
of above just 16.000 and 1.600. The lowest
number
of
graduate
and
postgruduate
of or relating to studies beyond a bachelor's degree
postgraduate
were shown by voluntary
work
section, which stood at about 3.500 and 345 respectively.
On the other hand
, part time and
unemployement
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
graduate
students made up at 17,725 and 16,235 respectively, whereas that of postgraduate students constitute to 2,535 and 1,625.
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