The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie
charts
illustrates
the percentages in regular Change the verb form
illustrate
meals
of three different types of nutrients, all of them might not be healthy if eaten careless
.
Change the adjective
carelessly
Overall
it can be seen that dinner
and lunch meals
are contains
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contain
biggest
percentages for both sodium and saturated fat. Correct article usage
the biggest
However
, the percentage
of added sugar
which was consumed on
snack time was considerably higher than Change preposition
during
other
Change preposition
at other
meals
.
Looking at the sodium and saturated fat charts
, it is evident that 43% of people consumed sodium-based meals
on
Change preposition
at
dinner
, which was the highest proportion for these pie charts
. Whereas
, the percentage
of saturated fat which was consumed on
Change preposition
at
dinner
stood at 37%. Regarding to
saturated fat consumption, 16% of saturated fat Remove the preposition
apply
consumed
Add a missing verb
is consumed
on
breakfast. 14% of sodium Change preposition
at
eaten
during snack and breakfast, which were the lowest Add a missing verb
was eaten
percentage
for these charts
.
Turning to the
added Correct article usage
apply
sugar
it is clear that
the percentage
of added sugar
which was consumed during snack time stood at 42%. However
, proportion
of Add an article
the proportion
dinner
and lunch was 23%, and 19%, respectively. The lowest proportion for
added Change preposition
of
sugar
consumption was breakfast
time with 16%.Change preposition
at breakfast
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