Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The majority of companies nowadays value their employee`s competency,
whereas
others still pay attention to how their workers
get dressed decently.This
essay will discuss both views and explain companies ought to allow flexibility for staffs
to dress Fix the agreement mistake
staff
what
they think is appropriate. From one point, many companies set Change preposition
in what
stict
rules Correct your spelling
strict
up
about Change preposition
apply
employee`s
wearings, Change noun form
employee
such
as banks or other different organisations. They tend to think that Correct article usage
a strict
strict
dressed person will be less Change the word
strictly
attention grabbing
, whenever they work with clients. Add a hyphen
attention-grabbing
As well as
it helps staffs
to Fix the agreement mistake
staff
wofk
effectively without any disturbance. Correct your spelling
work
Moreover
, if workers
do not follow rules, employers would even give the hoof employees
. From another point, other organisations much more have an interest in terms of quality of performance, rather than appearance. Undeniably, when somebody is in either Change preposition
to employees
comfortable
or Correct article usage
a comfortable
covenient
outfit, it will not cause inconvenience towards working hours, Correct your spelling
convenient
i
think. In my view, each individual should get dressed Change the capitalization
I
according to
character, mood or whether they work. A striking example, here, can be workers
in one of the most popular company
in the USA, which is called " Technique". Change to a plural noun
companies
There all
employees can wear whatever they want, so Rephrase
All
that
the main director of Correct word choice
apply
this
company John Smtyh believes that by means of any type of clothing may contribute among
Change preposition
to
workers
Change noun form
workers'
worker's
creativeness
to work effectively. Replace the word
creativity
To conclude
, a smartly dressed person may probably serve as a main cause of punctuality among clients. However
, without having the best quality of job, the appearance may become invisible to others, in my opinion.Submitted by Kamola on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion