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The traditional idea of working for the same company for life in one particular pace is changing. Today people work for different companies, in different jobs and different ways. Unfortunately, this also leads to job in security and uncertainty about the future. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays people want to live in a vibrant
life
 because of their unlimited dreams or wishes. Taking into account wide range of choices to dwell it seems
possible but
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possible, but
 there are lots of
inconveniences
Suggestion
inconvenience
 to adopt the changes of the new environment in a new colleague and some dangers may appear in a daily
life
. In
this
 essay, I will highlight these negative influences of moving to a new workplace. In developed countries due to the opportunities of living conveniences people, in most cases, do not want to live in the same city during the entire
life
. They want to change their
workplaces
Suggestion
workplace
. But in
this
 hectic
life
, employers should care about the safeties of their workers.
However
,
new comers
any new participant in some activity
newcomers
 might not be welcomed as usual. Because some employers prefer to take care more about their workers who have been working for them for years than the new members of colleagues who came from away.
Secondly
, adopting in a new colleague demands a person much time and a lot of afford.
For example
,
Accept space
,
 finding a way to the boss’s soul is hard job.
Furthermore
, fixing new influences of the attitudes of the people around them is demanded rather curiosity. In
this
 condition
this
 person definitely feels himself or herself alone.
This
 may be dangerous for their personal
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
. So, people should think about not only the beneficial sides,
such
 as money or reputation, of working in a new company but
also
 care about the upcoming inconveniences in their future
life
.
Submitted by Elyor Islamov on

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