In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many families have

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of

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. In most homes,

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husband and wife, have to earn in order to make ends meet.

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, some people have argued, that

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will be of benefit to the

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,

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others believe that the

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will be affected majorly, as they may lack parental support. In fact, I agree with the former.

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essay will discuss

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points of view.

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,

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will gain much when

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parents

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are

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earners for a number of reasons.

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, additional

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will amount to a better standard of living.

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,

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whose

parents

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are

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earners often attend the best schools. They

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have access to a lot of educational devices which can boost their learning. Another advantage of double

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is the fact that

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children

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from

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homes can be able to afford things they need. People who believe that the

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are affected most

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have conceived

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idea

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of various reasons. One of

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is the fact that

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most

parents

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are not usually available to their

offsprings

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, the busy lifestyle at work contributes to emotional detachment in most families. To illustrate, most jobs require

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staff to work from 9am till 5pm. Many

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do not get home until the later part of the night.

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, they have little or no time for their

children

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. In conclusion,

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essay has examined

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sides of the argument. Finding a work-life balance is essential in alleviating the harmful effects of dual

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sources on

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children

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.