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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can effect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given  to  colour schemes when decorating  places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour  influence people`s  health and capacity to work?

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 is considered to be the most  effective method of changing 
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  Health or mood. Many psychologists claim that
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 serves as a significant phenomenon
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 people feel. In that case, the very attention of home Designers should be given to the right decoration of
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 as offices and Hospitals. On the one side, from ancient times, more and more people have noticed that
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  possesses 
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 great influence
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consciousness
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the consciousness
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 of personality. The
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 is capable of varying  the mood of the human  simultaneously, I think. If they woke up Early in the morning  with fine fettle, it might be acquired into megrim without any reason in their working  
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 ,  because of unlikely
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 for them.
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, some psychologists give a recommendation about  being attentive to
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,
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 selecting for working
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. The most popular psychologist in Uzbekistan Aziza  Tashxujaeva  vindicated  that by  means  of 
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colour
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  it  is not  a burning  issue to  know  the character of  a person,
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. On the  other side, the majority of  either  home or office  decorators  try  To  choose  bright  colours in
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  as hospitals and  offices, because  as
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  Was  aforementioned,
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  is likely to  exert  an influence 
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  someone`s   not 
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  energy
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capacity
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 to work. The shadow tones may  probably  asphyxiate 
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  humanity  and lead to  the unknown cause of  losing  control  Or  other  health problems, like headache  and  fatigue. For the most part, bright tones are suitable  for babies as well,so that it catches  their  eyes. A striking  example, here, as it was published  in BBC News,
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boy with
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system at the age
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lost
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 consciousness at school ,
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To conclude
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,
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 plays
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 role  in our life.
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colours  are  The  main  key 
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keeping
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  our health and  concentration  as well, in my opinion.
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  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
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