In the past, many male leaders had led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it were ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some periods of world history, society had been controlled by male governors, which had resulted in arguments and fights. While some individuals think that it would be better managed and more peaceful if the government were led by females, I totally disagree with
this
statement since women tend to have less
time
to concentrate on political issues, and they usually make crucial decisions based on emotion rather than logic.
To begin
with, women normally have less
time
to focus on political problems than men. According to a plethora of statistics conducted by
Vietnam Institute
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the Vietnam Institute
of Psychology and Social
Behavior
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Behaviour
, females under 50 often have 1.3 hours less leisure
time
per day than their male
reers
the back of a military formation or procession
rears
reefs
arrears
due to home responsibilities
such
as cooking or taking care of children. If it is so,
this
shortage of
time
might lead to less effective performance while working.
For example
, Nguyen Thi Anh, the prime minister of Vietnam, concerning about her child who was ill at home wanted to finish her duty as soon as possible by quickly making a crucial announcement without carefully considering its potential source of conflicts that later brought several harmful impacts to society.
On the other hand
, women tend to solve problems by basing on emotion rather than rational thought. Since sometimes they
can not
can not
cannot
distinguish between personal stuff and working
asignments
a duty that you are assigned to perform (especially in the armed forces)
assignments
, their decisions are likely to be influenced by their mood.
As a result
, there is a high chance of getting a serious mistake when women making a choice in wrong
time
.
For instance
, when Pham Ha Phuong, a well-known politician, is high, she is easy-going to be persuaded
in
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by
international arguments, and when she is dull, it is possible for her to declare a world war. That
also
can explain why Tao Thao, one of the most famous Chinese generals, used to say he usually asked his wife for advice
then
followed it reversely. In conclusion, while people believe that ruling
society
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a society
by women leads to less struggles and battles,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would argue that female leaders might make these problems more serious.
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  • male-dominated leadership
  • empathetic
  • cooperative
  • inclusive society
  • governance
  • diversity
  • sustainable peace
  • social welfare
  • collaborative approach
  • international relations
  • leadership qualities
  • decision-making processes
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