Medical studies have shown that smoking not only leads to health problems for the smoker, but also for people close by. For this reason, smoking should not be allowed in public places. Opponents argue that the forbiddance of smoking would possibly affect the freedom of choice or lead to the closure of many bars and pubs. However, supporters of this ban place people’s health problems at the top of the scale.

We

can not

can not

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deny the fact that smoking is increasingly becoming a big problem in our society. It causes negative impacts on smokers and non- smokers.

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, smoking should be banned in public places because of the following reasons. The

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reason of prohibiting smoking in public places is that smoking damages not only smokers’ health but

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non -smokers’ health. Eventually, it causes lung cancer for them. Many studies have shown that more 85 percent of smokers get lung cancer. Unfortunately, people close by smokers

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get high risk of getting the disease because they become passive smokers. The

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reason of prohibiting smoking in public places is that smoking makes smokers become addicted.

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, it is very difficult for them to give up smoking or they

can not

can not

cannot

concentrate on doing something.

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, my uncle tried to give up smoking 2 years ago but he could not. Now, he smokes a

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of cigarette per day. The

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reason of prohibiting smoking is that smoking makes smokers waste too much money.

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, smokers smoke about a package of cigarette per day which wastes 30,000 VND. What I mean is that they spend nearly one million Dongs per month and over ten million Dongs a year. In conclusion, smoking causes too much

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on smokers and passive smokers.

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, I quietly agree with the idea that smoking should not be allowed in public places