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nowadays children watch a lot of tv and play video games. however, some people think that it is not good for a child's mental health. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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There are lots of differences between life of
90's kids
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the 90's kids
 and kids of
21st century
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the 21st century
. Nowadays, most children spent their childhood playing video games and keeping an eye on
television
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the television
. One school of thought is that doing so may leads to severe mental health issues, with which I partially disagree as there are numerous benefits too.
First
 of all
,
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,
there are so many reasons which will prove
such
 activities innocent. There
are
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is
 ample amount of brain games available to
play which
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play, which
 requires great concentration, focus and intelligence. Playing
such
 games on regular
bases
a relation that provides the foundation for something
basis
 will definitely enhance cerebral capabilities which will make kids smarter and mentally sharp.
Secondly
, watching various knowledge shows and programs on television
also
 possess
positive impact
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a positive impact
 on
children's mind
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the child's mind
child's mind
a child's mind
. By doing so
,
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,
they will unlock their hidden talents by learning new skills and things. They will acquire information out of
box
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the box
 which will help them out to decide their future path. Ultimately, they will be mentally happy and satisfied. But it should be in limits as every coin has two sides
,
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,
there are several drawbacks of doing these activities beyond certain boundaries. By playing
violent type
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the violent type
a violent type
 of games and watching
such
 content on television may make them aggressive and short tempered that may
leads
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lead
 them in a valley of depression
,
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,
anxiety and psychological problems. If we Look up and figure out all pros and cons carefully, it
will leads
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will lead
 to
conclusion
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the conclusion
a conclusion
 that benefits of playing video games and watching TV outweigh risks.
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