Some people say that cooking food at home is a waste of time. They claim that good restaurants are better and can make modern living easier and less stressful. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, the majority of people are confused between going out or cooking at
home
. Many people said that having
home made
made or produced in the home or by yourself
homemade
food
is a waste of time and eating at good restaurants is much better. I firmly agree that preparing and consuming meals at
home
is a better alternative than dining out in restaurants.
Firstly
,
home
-cooked meals
is
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are
the main source for healthier
food
because fresh and clean ingredients like organic
food
can be used in any meal.
In contrast
, many
restaurants even
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restaurants, even
a good one still use frozen ingredients, preservatives in order
to keep
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keep
the good
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the best
looking and the good taste of the
food
.
Secondly
, you can easily control your economy and
also
saving some money because you don't have to pay for tips.
For
example when
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example, when
you
having
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have
are having
a meal in any restaurants you must pay
higher price
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a higher price
higher prices
for the same
home
-cooked meal because of the service taxes.
However
, some people believe that going to a restaurant can save
many
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much
time and
home made
made or produced in the home or by yourself
homemade
food
is not as good as restaurant meal.
Nowadays many
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Nowadays, many
pages like 5 minutes craft, Russian
hack
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hacks
can help you to
cook
from
scratch so
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scratch, so
it is very easy to
cook
and there are many simple recipes for you to try at
home
. Take myself as an example, currently I am a student and I
cook
lunch alone for myself every single day and it only takes about 15 to 20 minutes to prepare and
cook
a good meal. In conclusion, I strongly believe that cooking and dining at
home
is better than having
food
in restaurants; people can have healthy meals and save money in the process.
But sometimes
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But, sometimes
going to a restaurant to chill out is not a bad idea.
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