Many people believe that University students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects. To what extend do you agree or disagree with the viewpoint?

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Nowadays

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majority

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the majority

of people tend to go for their higher education in institutions like a

university

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or a college. Some people believe that students should have their liberty to

study

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subjects that they are interested in while others disagree with it and I personally believe that they should have freedom to pick subjects within prescribed syllabus, not whatever they like.

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studies are one of the crucial

part

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parts

of a

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student's

life. So, the freedom of selecting subjects at

university

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level would help making education more effective and not to force them to

study

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those subjects that they no interest at all.

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, technology related subjects are quite

important but

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important, but

students would not learn that

all if

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all, if

he is forced to like programming, while he is interested in arts related subjects l. Students believe that forcing them to

study

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wide range subjects to cater the need to have employment in but

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will only make them workers of offices, not the leaders of the nation.

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, getting

education

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an education

about specific stream can help students to become experts.

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, society needs as many artists as there are as many scientists so forcing them to

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science related course would create

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an imbalance

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side, making students

study

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wide range

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a wide range

of subjects will make them more knowledgeable and help them to get prepared for taking challenges. Apart from

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, students might misuse the opportunity and f picking subjects by their own and they might choose

same subjects

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the same subjects

of their

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semesters. So, to avoid

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authorities must

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keep check on the chosen subjects to avoid

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error. To conclude

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, studying

wide range

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a wide range

of subjects can make them more

knowledgeable but

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knowledgeable, but

not experts of one particular area. In my opinion students should have right to choose their subjects as per their interest not just

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for

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the sake

of getting employed in upcoming years.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

315 words

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