some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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hardships and unpleasant circumstances. While some may feel that acceptance is the most sustainable approach, the others argue that we should strive to better these situations, rather than trying to escape from them.

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both opinions carry equal strength, I lean towards the latter much more.I will state my opinion on following points. Undeniably, people may be put into the dilemma of situations in which they must either accept what happens or try to make some alterations.

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with, some people regard acceptance as one of the best way to face with hardships. It is a common belief that by accepting unfavourable situations, at least people may have a better sense of security, feel more assured, and 

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and depression as well. While

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approach seems to be advantageous, it seems as if a lot of people try to provide conditions for improvement so as to face with bad circumstances.They believe that only by devoting time and effort, could everything accomplished, even changing the current situation.On top of that,

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a wide range of abilities and skills could be enhanced during striving to resolve the problems.

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experienced to cope with the situation which comes unexpectedly in real life.

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I side with those who believe that people should do their best to move up in life.

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, it is evident that the advancement of human civilization is mostly attributed to those who strongly believe that there are always paths to improve their lives. But for spirit great inventions

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namely, light bulbs, electricity, computers would have never put to use.

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 that only by solving the existing problems, not by simply accepting them, can people discover their abilities, improve their skills and live their lives to the fullest without worrying. Take the example of entrepreneurs, sports athletes or scientists in many countries who achieved stunning success thanks to their never give up mindset and their continual effort. 

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, I believe that in most cases, as failure is

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of success, they need to give a shot to alter their situations in order to reward. In conclusion,

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advantageous acceptance seems, providing condition to improve the circumstances is regarded as a good alternative due to its benefits on our lives as well as society.

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, I am of the opinion that striving to change unhappy situations should be always given priority.