You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Friend, Hope you are doing good. I am so happy to inform you that I am coming to your place to do my

graduation

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graduate

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studies. As an immigrant

i

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I

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won'

t

be able to get to stay in

college

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a college

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hostel there , so would have to find

a

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apply

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private accommodation .

This

would cost me around 300 dollars including my living cost. So, I would like to do a part-time

job

, which would help me in getting through my living cost. It would be great if you could help me in getting a

job

in the same place where you work currently.

This

is really important for me as

i

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I

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don'

t

know

much

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many

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people there. If you can'

t

arrange the

job

at your place, you can refer me to some of your friends where

i

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I

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could find a

job

asap. I don'

t

want to disturb my parents

for

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with

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my living cost

..

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.

...

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They already had done so much in sending me

aboard

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abroad

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for my studies.