Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era, existing stereotypical prejudices about
conventional
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the conventional gender role
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role has been a debatable issue for some decades. Some people stated that due to differences in physical features as well as abilities, women are limited to taking on the so-called men’s occupation and vice versa.
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, in my opinion, it is unjust to bear
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stereotype in mind due to the reasons as
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follows
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, broad generalization about characteristics of men and women create public’s misconceptions on people’s ability in their suitable careers. Though it is evident that men and women do not share common characteristics, there are still exceptions in terms of human abilities.
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, the majority of people would consider politicians be male rather than female;
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, talented female governors
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start
to prove their excellent ability in the political field as time pass by.
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, people’s decision
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about
their career does not based on their
gender
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but their passion and capacity.
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,
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equality in
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the workplace
a workplace
workplaces
would provide a more balanced working environment. As a matter of fact, each
gender
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has a distinct way of processing information,
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people can broaden their knowledge by taking
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an opposite gender’s approach
the opposite gender’s approach
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’s approach to an issue into consideration. If men are more of a logical thinking creature, women
on the other hand
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, will have the tendency toward creativity. By combining two of these aspects, a sense of balance at workplace is likely to
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remain
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stable
. In conclusion, despite the gap between men and women’s characteristics, people
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doubtlessly have
all rights to pursue their desire career and should not be discouraged from picking their occupation regarding their
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innate
  • biological differences
  • characteristics
  • gender roles
  • stereotypes
  • equal opportunities
  • gender biases
  • fair representation
  • skills
  • qualifications
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